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wow

Sounds horrible on M-Audio DSM1 Pro Hi-Rez Studio Monitor, really need to lower the volume on everything, eq is horrible

InvertedScrotum responds:

M-Audio fucking sucks. You're a cheap piece of shit, buy better hardware.

Good First

Since this is the first hardstyle attempt! Good work!

My Advice is that since this is hardstyle, that lead should have some more scream to it, not volume, but some strong compression, Look into Cakewalk Boost11.

That'll give you the desired Scream.

Good Work.

-Alonso Mejia

djhathor23 responds:

yea im still working on getting more vsts right now im working with nexus presets so not many to choose from lol but thanks for the info ill look into that cakewalk boost

Could have been alot better

This could have been alot better, Your arp was ok, Would have done you good to add a more complex sort of bass to go with it, it seemed very plain, Then also if you would have played with some LFO's on your Instrument, like cutoff, and other stuff you could have done some nice automation effects.

If you need help PM me and we'll have a chat on an IM or some thing
You have FL?

-Alonso Mejia

UndergroundFantasy responds:

Yea i have FL8. I dont really have an IM program really... i just use email. My email is nightxxcrawler@gmail.com

I Like it

I Agree with Ethalyn, This is a very good actually, got to like those 8bit sounds with that bassline.

Good work.

-Alonso Mejia

Xorberax responds:

Thanks for the review, but whats with the 5?
You could've at least told me what was wrong with the song.

Needs lots of work

Somehow remids me of Psy Trance, Needs lots of work, advice would be to Lower the volume down on the bells, hurts ears on bigger speakers.

Loudness is not everything, remember that.

Sidechain would be fun to play with on that bassline, don't know how, PM Me.

-Alonso Mejia

JAnonymityVR responds:

I was aware of that after putting it on my MP4 Player DX. Very first song, I just figured I'd save it bc it was my frist work. Thanks for the review!

Terrible

Whether or not this song was meant as a joke from the author is unknown, I do agree that the song is very offbeat and horribly mixed.

Everyone starts at a different point, whether or not they suck is of no concern to anyone, nobody could say that when first beginning music they Owned. Instead, You should tell someone how to fix a track, that way they learn and not make the same mistakes.

You have a lot of work to do, But don't get discouraged, Once you get to a certain point, everything you worked so hard for will make it all worth it.

It was terrible, but we all start somewhere.

-Alonso Mejia

JAnonymityVR responds:

Your review doesn't tell me how to make it any better.

What is that

What is that? It sounds like you tried to edit another song, Either that, or your mixing is Horrid, No offense, But is this a joke?

-Alonso Mejia

InvertedScrotum responds:

what the fuck do you mean faggot, i made this piece of shit so sukk mi cock

Could use lots more work

Sound's very simple, but your own your way to becoming better.
The Piano would have sounded better if it had some sort of reverb, and a minor delay, would have that classic trance piano sound.
Didn't like the Base very much. seemed simple, but its a start, so no complaints.

Fail.

"FL for industrial. fl relaly knows how to give yours ong distortion, usually in a bad way"

You have no idea the true power of FL Studio, Some talented young Producers use FL Studio, and excel more than other people who attempt to make Trance with other DAW's, eg: Sonar 8, Cubase, Logic Pro, Pro tools.

In reality, there is no universal Digital Audio Workstationto make trance, or any side-genre. It all comes down to Skill, and Perseverance.

GBand is horrible btw, Loops? You can never grow from Garageband and expand, and thats because you're limited to Loops, Only really being able to change pitch and the sort. Even if you plugged your piano in on a midi setup, those sounds that are built into GBand can barely be changed.

You have alot to learn, but we all start somewhere

-Alonso Mejia

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

Thanks man. I appreciate the honest review, I dont plan on going into the music industry anymore, Experimenting is fun enough for me =).

Needs some work

Sounds very fuzzy, not sure what it us, the instruments sound sorta fuzzy too, but if you get rid of all that, i'm sure it would sound better.

Good Job

-Alonso Mejia

Musica17 responds:

Thank you for your review! Oh yes, my file definitely does need work, which is why I went back for another recording of a tweaked version. I'm hoping to have that new file up this year. . . I've found no programs to add my finishing touches though with the audio and no files to add in where need be. Yet I shall never-the-less have my file up! Eventually. . .

I produce various forms of electronic music, it's experimental seeing as how when i create a new track i'll go with the flow. I tend to be more along Progressive Trance Though. My passion is Music, My Inspiration is my girl.

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